I'd have to agree with meatwad
But yes, if you could get your singer to sing with a bit more gravel and roughness in his voice it would suit the song perfectly.
I almost rated this higher.
It had a good intro. Steadily adding layers of sound to make build up the intensity. But then I heard the vocals come in and i kind of pooped a little. In all honesty, the singing was pretty weak compared to the fairly decent guitar riffs and bass lines. From what I discerned from the lyrics, it was just some stereotypical "meh im being oppressed lets be free and have fun and be in love wahhhahhahhhhhhhh...". Seriously. Other wise it was pretty decent. Either make the song purely instrumental or completely rework the vocal part.
I agree the lyrics tell a fairly cliche story and we will try and improve the singing, thanks for reviewing.
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